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Sarah Allen's avatar

This title got me to read ;) Really good suggestions. And I had no idea that Substack let you A/B test like that! So good to know.

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Julie Vick's avatar

Glad that it worked, ha! And I think the A/B test thing is smart too, I may try it out in the future.

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Evelyn Griffith's avatar

Thanks so much for sharing. It never occurred to me that if I didn't pick a good title I might have to suck it up with whatever was assigned to me. I appreciate the heads up.

I personally tend to like titles that illude to something vague so like three days after readings i think "Oh, I get it now."

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Julie Vick's avatar

I like those kinds of titles too!

I think for more literary pubs, you are more often involved in the title decision, but for mainstream pubs, that isn't always the case (although you can also talk to the editor about changing a title that you don't love too).

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Evelyn Griffith's avatar

oh cool! It's always interesting to hear how those kinds of publications differ

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The Messy Millennial's avatar

This is goos advice! I like shocking titles and punchy ones. Some of the best ones are in NYT which I read everyday and since I write now I analyze why I clicked on them

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Julie Vick's avatar

I think it is smart to analyze why you like them. I feel like The Cut often has interesting/clever titles that I am drawn to.

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The Messy Millennial's avatar

I'll check them out. Thank you

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Lindsey Smith | Not Normal's avatar

Super helpful piece as always! Sometimes I have felt weird including the title of a piece in a pitch for some odd reason but it’s good to know that’s advised.

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Julie Vick's avatar

I definitely wouldn't feel weird about it. I've heard multiple editors say it's a good practice/helpful.

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Jennifer Gallo Gaites's avatar

This is great advice (for someone who generally puts off/dislikes coming up with titles)! I don’t know why I never thought to look at the tone of titles at a pub before sending, but I’ll be doing that now. Also, that typewriter is judging my procrastination with those eyes

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Julie Vick's avatar

I think looking through the titles can be helpful. And that typewriter is looking a little judgy. It may also have a mustache?

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Sarah Gardner's avatar

This is so helpful! I've definitely found that when I'm struggling with a title, it can be because the piece is about too many things and I need to zero in. Thanks for these tips!

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Julie Vick's avatar

Yes, that is a good point! I think when I've gone to write the title, I sometimes realize what I need is to rewrite the piece/pitch.

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Marisa Russello's avatar

I have used all these strategies except #4! I think it's easier after writing the piece.

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Julie Vick's avatar

That makes sense -- I think it depends on the piece whether I can write a title beforehand.

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Lisa Hides's avatar

This is so helpful, Julie!

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Julie Vick's avatar

Thanks, Lisa!

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Jennifer Haubrich's avatar

Great advice, as always, Julie! I've definitely had pieces bomb due to poor title choice. When you publish on a site that pays per read, the right title makes a big difference!

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Julie Vick's avatar

Yes, so true! Do you have strategies for writing titles for your pieces? I feel like on Substack/Medium the subtitle can also be important.

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Jennifer Haubrich's avatar

I don't know. I keep rewriting the title as I work on a piece. I do everything you suggest and still find titles tricky. If I republish an older post, I often change the title in the rewrite. For humor posts, I want to write a title that is both funny and gives a good idea of what the piece is about. Often I feel my titles are too descriptive and not funny enough. But still I persist!

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Julie Vick's avatar

I know, I feel like it's tricky with humor to try to tell what it's about and be funny. I think A/B testing on Medium titles would actually be helpful.

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Jennifer Haubrich's avatar

That would be interesting!

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Andy Carter's avatar

This is really good advice. Thanks for sharing, Julie!

I always struggle with titles! Tend to go VERY literal usually - think I might need to start being a bit more creative. Particularly like the idea of taking a line from the piece.

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Julie Vick's avatar

Thanks! I tend to go literal for some things too but think the more creative titles can be good too.

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